Part of a Specialized Illustration project at college ^^ We have to design a character for a product. I chose Mikado (aka Pocky) because it allowed me to do anime illustrations ^^
It´s just my opinion,but you should have an eye on the anatomy,but i like the idea of a pocky mascot very much^^and the impact is good. The hair could have had more volume(maybe you´ve draw a few single strains) and more lighting effect.The shading of her dress isn´t so bad,but it looks a little bit deformed because of her body.A tip of mine practise anatomy,i know it´s very hard and will take time,but in the end it will be remunerate <3 Maybe i have taken another background instead of the logo.
For all the effort you put into making her cute, the line work isn't very clean, which makes her look frumpy. I think you've done quite well but perhaps use the Pen Tool in PS for line work, or if this was free hand, make single, expressive lines rather than short scooting lines Makes me want some Poke though, so mission accomplished
The hair could have had more volume(maybe you´ve draw a few single strains) and more lighting effect.The shading of her dress isn´t so bad,but it looks a little bit deformed because of her body.A tip of mine practise anatomy,i know it´s very hard and will take time,but in the end it will be remunerate <3
Maybe i have taken another background instead of the logo.
Keep on trying and don´t give up^^\m/
Reiko <3
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